The first half of the book was great, but after the main characters got together the story seemed to drag on. It continued up to the point where both their fathers died, yet they still found no soluti...
I rather liked it, even if I rather dislike the name "Gair" and I'd have preferred if it ended a bit more...resolutely. As is, it rather leaves you hanging. Still, the universe is fantastic, and I'd r...
Boring story plot. ...
Is there any chance of a sequel?...
I read this story originally when it was posted to fictionpress and livejournal as two stories. The author did a great job editing and cleaning up everything, and I was so happy to finally be able to ...
I read this book in less then one day,what i can say is really good.Gair and Cavan are enemies who unite their armies to fight versus the emperor,they lose the war and the emperor calls them at court ...
The war between the three 'Veld Kingdoms and the Cheil Empire is over and the 'Velds have lost. Estveld, Ostveld, and Norveld must bow down to the Cheil Emperor and accept the terms of surrender. The ...
I first saw the book in fanfiction.com and waited around before finally purchasing the ebook and reading it the past week. The most outstanding thing in this book that amazed me was the world building...
The story dragged some in the middle and the ending then left me unsatisfied, that's why it's not a five stars.Prince Cavan and Gair are caught unprepared by some terms, when both their kingdoms are c...
Pleasantly surprised.Once purchased I still had reservations about the book and it's vague synopsis. However, the opening chapter literally further piqued my interest and rest is history. ...